Wivernryder's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Maria]

Excellent detail and shading on the face.

But your problem isn't that one of her eyes is set too high... on the contrary, her right eye (seen on the left) is too low. It doesn't follow the traditional eyes-halfway-up-the-head anatomy, and doesn't line up well with the top of her ear.
Now I'm not incredibly good at facial anatomy, so I won't be able to offer much more critique than that, but you might also want to look at where the ruffles meet the shoulders and make the transition a little smoother (particularly on the left of the piece).
Hope that helps a little.
If you're having trouble seeing what I am, try covering up the eye in question and viewing the other half of the face, as the right (her left) looks much more natural to me.

IloveNantes responds:

Hey, you're right! Thank you for the honest review. I feel a bit terrible now knowing that it turned out that the left eye wasn't too high, but that the other was too low. As an artist trying to get into the professional industry a few years from now, that's a bit disheartening.

But thank you again, I really appreciate it.

[Neil Poon Handler]

Aaaar

You're still missing many football fields of his forehead!

Kinsei responds:

I'll get a plastic surgeon to get right on that...

[I AM THE CHOSEN ONE]

You are truly...

A faithful Gropaga. May Lord Inglip bestow his blessings upon ye. Lay your hand 'pon the holy Weedaula and let his grace and wonder fill you.

Jae responds:

Bahahaha This is my favorite comment so far

[Muscle Sketches]

IT'S....

Man-tits.

Kinsei responds:

you know you love'em

[Monochrome Kiss]

Those Lips

Still really freak me out.

Kashi responds:

They will haunt your dreeeaaaaaammmmmsssss!

[The smell of sunshine]

It looks like a distorted gradient.

While interesting at least in the way it draws your eyes, it doesn't seem to evoke any real thought or sensation. It could be more inspired. It also looks as if it was fed through a low-quality television screen on it's way here.

... I'm just gonna keep throwing semi-artistic buzzwords until I find a way to say I don't think it's really art.
...well that was easy.

SukiWukiDookie responds:

I just did something that I felt was fun, and I liked the outcome. I understand your point of view, and thanks for the comment.