On this whole thing. But for those who want the song..
Skip to 1:14 for the part you all apparently want.
i really like you. be my private dancer.
I think this just proves
that there are no women on the internet.
Yeah.. I went there
I'm a sucker for TMBG
So I gotta say, though the animation was repetitive, I was drawn in by your excellent choice of music.
slap the monkey game.
I got the high score yay.
Yes it is.
I really didn't expect the jizz to fly that far, but that was the only unrealistic aspect of it. Then again, I suppose it would get a sort of pressure building up going through a tentacle that long.
But there was too much jizz, and the way it obscured her vag at the end was really disappointing, I would've liked a more revealing image at the end, with her in as vulnerable a position as she was.
It wasn't bad.
Not great, but not bad.
General is always like...
"fuck, we're dumbasses..."
Also, apparently you'll die multiple times due to your affiliations with multiple forums.
Jonny the Ninelives, they'll call you.
Each time, you'll rise in defense of a different forum, only to be struck down by trolls from General wielding massive meme-clubs.
Good thing I have my sarcastic banter armour, it gives resistance to trolls.
Not loving what you've done with it.
Personally I love their entire Broken Bride album and can't really appreciate what you've done to this part. It's jumpy and broken.
Viola or violin?
I haven't played in long enough to remember. I'm leaning towards violin though, because of the high notes.
She's got some really good notes in there. And the messing up really didn't detract from the piece much. I actually didn't notice it at first. And listening to it, I doubt that I could've played it back when I was practicing regularly. So yeah, kudos to her.
I agree, it is fan-fucking-tastic.
All I can see...
Is Lady Gaga everywhere.
Excellent detail and shading on the face.
But your problem isn't that one of her eyes is set too high... on the contrary, her right eye (seen on the left) is too low. It doesn't follow the traditional eyes-halfway-up-the-head anatomy, and doesn't line up well with the top of her ear.
Now I'm not incredibly good at facial anatomy, so I won't be able to offer much more critique than that, but you might also want to look at where the ruffles meet the shoulders and make the transition a little smoother (particularly on the left of the piece).
Hope that helps a little.
If you're having trouble seeing what I am, try covering up the eye in question and viewing the other half of the face, as the right (her left) looks much more natural to me.
Hey, you're right! Thank you for the honest review. I feel a bit terrible now knowing that it turned out that the left eye wasn't too high, but that the other was too low. As an artist trying to get into the professional industry a few years from now, that's a bit disheartening.
But thank you again, I really appreciate it.
Do the impossible
See the invisible
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